'Manly Fictions': how I elaborated this poem:-)

Seldomly those can distinguish the prosy and the verse that vibrates a sort of muic within the reader's brain while reading it to himself silently by musical tones of words.

I'm gonna show the process of how I elaboreted my poetry work 'Manly Fictions' below:

(the first draft)

Manly, which do you indicate ?
Female or Male?
As the age descended, your word got to find itself hollow
lacks the general name.
Mankind, neither macho nor brave
Woo-man? Gay or lez?

Thanks. You’re full of manly fictions
Just a species named the evil.
Keeps kind to man

Mankind, its origin was excrement of
The earth, mud only
Anatomical bliss handed off
To a branch to love the hollow.

Fated to be on halves.

(the second draft)

Manly, which do you indicate ?
Female or Male?
As the age descended, your word got to find itself hollow
lacks the general name.
Mankind, neither macho nor brave
Woo-man? Gay or lez?

Thanks. You’re full of manly fictions
Just a species named the evil.
Keeps kind to man

Mankind, its origin was excrement of
The earth, mud of sham
Anatomical bliss handed off
To an intimate branch to love the hollow.

Fated to be on halves and love each other.

(the third draft, decisive)

Manly, which do you indicate ?
Female or Male?
As the age descended, your word got to find itself hollow
lacks the general name.
Mankind, neither macho nor brave
Woo-man? Gay or lez?

Thanks. You’re full of manly fictions
Just a species named the evil
Keeps kind to man

Mankind, its origin was excrement of
The earth, mud of the counterfeit
Anatomical bliss handed off
To an intimate branch to love the hollow.

Fated to be on halves and love each other.

Him or Her, neither but to each counterpart
Simply melted down to be real.