2010年3月10日水曜日

Waney Moon


Waney Moon


Fanes where a youth visited in the daylight,
Waning moon still giggles in the eastward of those,
Wandering off his sunshine-lit way with a false lookout,
He didn’t know why he came here.

Lo, dead statues lost once and Heroes, Beauties, upright
Standing with no words, they are faded away with Time.
He was quite ignorant about the names once brilliant and those
Anecdotes, whispering to his ear like the giggling waney moon.

How dare the noon come with fanes soon darkened?
Or less thing the youth rips away no-willingly visiting.

Till the end of his life,
He shall not ever know why he was there
Unless the gloomy figure in the eastward skies teaches him
A hint on the shadowy but doubly life before his path.

2010年3月9日火曜日

Welcome Home March


Welcome Home March


March sets between February and April
By grudging calendar; that does to everyone,
The growth of flowers and animals.

Indoor or outdoor to the season, the Spring
By which side, naturally the greeting words turn over.
‘Welcome home!’
‘Hello’

One returnee after such a long tunnel, barren
He arrived home no sooner than when said ‘Hello’,
Someone waiting there softly said ‘Welcome home’.

March sets between February and April
By grudging calendar; that does to everyone,
The growth of flowers and animals.

Amid the outside and the inside of doorway,
One returnee was stopping with dismay hardly saying
‘Hello’
‘Welcome home!’
With garrulous lights, someone softly said so.


2010年2月17日水曜日

'Manly Fictions': how I elaborated this poem:-)


Seldomly those can distinguish the prosy and the verse that vibrates a sort of muic within the reader's brain while reading it to himself silently by musical tones of words.


I'm gonna show the process of how I elaboreted my poetry work 'Manly Fictions' below:



(the first draft)



Manly, which do you indicate ?
Female or Male?
As the age descended, your word got to find itself hollow
lacks the general name.
Mankind, neither macho nor brave
Woo-man? Gay or lez?

Thanks. You’re full of manly fictions
Just a species named the evil.
Keeps kind to man

Mankind, its origin was excrement of
The earth, mud only
Anatomical bliss handed off
To a branch to love the hollow.

Fated to be on halves.



(the second draft)




Manly, which do you indicate ?
Female or Male?
As the age descended, your word got to find itself hollow
lacks the general name.
Mankind, neither macho nor brave
Woo-man? Gay or lez?

Thanks. You’re full of manly fictions
Just a species named the evil.
Keeps kind to man

Mankind, its origin was excrement of
The earth, mud of sham
Anatomical bliss handed off
To an intimate branch to love the hollow.

Fated to be on halves and love each other.



(the third draft, decisive)



Manly, which do you indicate ?
Female or Male?
As the age descended, your word got to find itself hollow
lacks the general name.
Mankind, neither macho nor brave
Woo-man? Gay or lez?

Thanks. You’re full of manly fictions
Just a species named the evil
Keeps kind to man

Mankind, its origin was excrement of
The earth, mud of the counterfeit
Anatomical bliss handed off
To an intimate branch to love the hollow.

Fated to be on halves and love each other.

Him or Her, neither but to each counterpart
Simply melted down to be real.



2010年2月13日土曜日

Sry for having not been posting so far



Nearly a year passed by since I posted last.
Sry for it. But I think you understand the innovation in choir,chorus of mines now.
You may call me an odd person, yes I used to snub any reputation since my 20's going my way alone.
I'm already in my first years of 50's. Despite of the age, there's words encouraging me; quoted from John Donne 'The Autumnal'.




Xerxe's strange Lydian love, the Platane tree,
Was lov'd for age, none being so large as she,
Or else because, being young, nature did bless
Her youth with age's glory, Barrenness.
If we love things long sought, Age is a thing
Which we are fifty years in compassing;
If transitory things, which soon decay,
Age must be loveliest at the latest day.

My arts are so giantic and so varifying that bears luxuriance beyond your imagination, as Xerxe's strange love in Lydia, the Platane tree.